being an individual i gone through many moments which experienced that the way our confidence our positive attatiude works the mindset of the person being with us changes his thoughts let me say if i asked read between the lines every body start reading the para by feeling to get out of that para which is nothing but expression of a simple story book of kids
what i feel kids are smarter to read between the lines i.e. if i ask my son see if u right properly i will buy chocklate for u the moment he hear he reply can i buy chocklate from that store and next as i said papa he is not writing daily but he is getting same the compraison the kid does is nothing but between the lines
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कामरेड नाखुश हैं हमसे, मंदिर-मस्जिद वाले भी
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1 week ago
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why don't you regularly write man ?
Your composition is perfect and it
seems that you have power of words too.
Just expand the the central theme with a little imagination. Don't be shy and don't care for comments of any sort..
either good or bad .
Most of the time, they are irrelevant.
All the best !
thanks i write some more about system if possible go through it
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